For my Chicago extended essay, I wrote about one of my favourite failed political projects of all time, and talked about how this reflected the bridge between theory and practice (for the portals prompt). Friend says it's too impersonal and I should start over completely. I can copy and paste the essay for reference, but I really think it's a waste of a good prompt for me to BS about how much I love communities for another 700 words.
How do you think the extended essay should be approached?
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